I love most of this picture, I think you did an especially fantastic job on Ariel! Jasmine also looks great, but (I know you wrote you wanted to clean up the pic a bit) her mouth and cheeks look a little strange to me. I am sorry to say, but Aurora looks more like Janis from the Muppet Show than Aurora, everything from the eyes and mouth to the eyepatch just doesn't seem right. I can't wait to see if you touch up this piece because you are very talented and this is a great concept!
I like how Ariel is the only one without an eye-patch. It makes her so cute!!! Being a mermaid, she knows a thing or two about pirates I'll bet. And I have to say, Jasmine looks tough. She could beat any Blackbeard, Bluebeard, Rainbowbeard, etc. any day of the week.